Tuesday 30 August 2016

S1-03_Eldon Ng_10 Poem Recitation

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bwfh-w3RhAX0LXl3X0hETk5rX0E

5 comments:

  1. The poem is good but pronunciation needs some work but still kinda good

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  2. Pronunciation- Only some words were mispronounced
    Pace- It was not too fast or too slow.
    Pitch& tone- It was used often and was conveying the meaning of the poem.
    Pauses- Pauses were appropriate.
    Power- Voice was relatively loud.

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  3. Pronunciation- Only some words were mispronounced
    Pace- It was not too fast or too slow.
    Pitch& tone- It was used often and was conveying the meaning of the poem.
    Pauses- Pauses were appropriate.
    Power- Voice was relatively loud.

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  5. Pronunciation- Words like shrieked and creaked can be pronounced with a stronger "ed" sound
    Pace- It was appropriate
    Pitch& tone- The pitch and tone can be more enthusiastic.
    Pauses- Pauses were too short at the part " Cough. Ruler Creak" and " Scamper. stop. Scamper. Stop"

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