The poem is good but pronunciation needs some work but still kinda good
Pronunciation- Only some words were mispronouncedPace- It was not too fast or too slow.Pitch& tone- It was used often and was conveying the meaning of the poem.Pauses- Pauses were appropriate.Power- Voice was relatively loud.
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Pronunciation- Words like shrieked and creaked can be pronounced with a stronger "ed" sound Pace- It was appropriate Pitch& tone- The pitch and tone can be more enthusiastic. Pauses- Pauses were too short at the part " Cough. Ruler Creak" and " Scamper. stop. Scamper. Stop"