Wednesday 31 August 2016

(12) Ian poem recitation

my poem

4 comments:

  1. Pronouncaition is a bit off

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  2. it sounds a bit like you are lagging, big gaps between each word and slow read.

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  4. Didn't say the title of the poem, there is also some gaps between each word

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