Tuesday, 30 August 2016

( 11)Gavin Tay Poem Recitation Practice

https://drive.google.com/a/s2016.sst.edu.sg/file/d/0B0ijAzJvTU4Gbi04ajhodTlBLWs/view

5 comments:

  1. Quite good and the pronunciation was good, maybe pacing could be better?

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  3. Pronunciation- Not many words were mispronounced.
    Pace- It was read a little too fast.
    Pitch& tone- It was used often but not always conveying the meaning of the poem/sentence,
    Pauses- Pauses were appropriate.
    Power- Voice was not as strong.

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  4. Pronunciation: Words like thud can have a stronger " d" sound but the pronunciation of the rest of the word are good
    Pace: The pace is a little to fast and doesnt match the message that the poem is trying to tell
    Pitch- The pitch is used well in the part " GOAL" good job:)
    Power- The voice was powerful and loud

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