Tuesday 30 August 2016

(21) Oh Jun Rong's Poetry Recitation

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4eondUy-W9zaE1zSkF0ZDMxTnM

2 comments:

  1. The tone and pronunciation is great, but I feel the speed/pace was a bit too quick, and the feeling of the poem wasn't brought out enough, slow down slightly while reciting, and it will be great. Good job!

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  2. You could slow down your pace and pronunciation could be better, add a bit more emotion and it would be great. Nice job!

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