Tuesday, 30 August 2016

(16) Josiah Choo Poem Recitation

Link for poem
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3YNy5Tg7JK6cFoxRjhMaUo1bGc

4 comments:

  1. Pronunciation and Articulation:2
    Rhythm, fluency and pace: 1
    Pitch and Tone:1
    Pause: 2
    Power:1

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  2. pace abit to fast, tone can improve , overall good try

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  3. theres background noise, the pitch and tone can improve, paused too shortly

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