You could pronounce late (t sound), world (d sound', throw (th sound) better, pace should be quicker and voice should be slightly louder when the wife speaks. You could also vary your pitch and tone more. Good job!
Pronunciation- Some of your "th' were not pronounced properly, such as, "throw" and "through". Also, some of your "ed" and "d" were not pronounced clearly, such as "did" and "slipped". Pace- The pace remained the same throughout the whole poem. You should try to have some various. You should have paused more at the last part of the poem. Pitch& tone- Your pitch should go high at some points of the poem. Pauses- Pauses were added with meaning. Power- Try to be more energetic.
Pace: The rhythm is a tiny bit slow at the part where the husband was speaking. Pitch: You could add more emphasis on 'give me my ring part' to make it sound more scary. Pauses: Only pause at the full stops and commas Pronunciation: " TH" can be pronounced clearly like when you said "not a thing" Tone: More enthusiastic and more energetic all in al great job and good use of pitch and volume for the speech!
Pace: The rhythm is a tiny bit slow at the part where the husband was speaking. Pitch: You could add more emphasis on 'give me my ring part' to make it sound more scary. Pauses: Only pause at the full stops and commas Pronunciation: " TH" can be pronounced clearly like when you said "not a thing" Tone: More enthusiastic and more energetic all in al great job and good use of pitch and volume for the speech!
You could pronounce late (t sound), world (d sound', throw (th sound) better, pace should be quicker and voice should be slightly louder when the wife speaks. You could also vary your pitch and tone more. Good job!
ReplyDeletePronunciation- Some of your "th' were not pronounced properly, such as, "throw" and "through". Also, some of your "ed" and "d" were not pronounced clearly, such as "did" and "slipped".
ReplyDeletePace- The pace remained the same throughout the whole poem. You should try to have some various. You should have paused more at the last part of the poem.
Pitch& tone- Your pitch should go high at some points of the poem.
Pauses- Pauses were added with meaning.
Power- Try to be more energetic.
Pace: The rhythm is a tiny bit slow at the part where the husband was speaking. Pitch: You could add more emphasis on 'give me my ring part' to make it sound more scary.
ReplyDeletePauses: Only pause at the full stops and commas
Pronunciation: " TH" can be pronounced clearly like when you said "not a thing"
Tone: More enthusiastic and more energetic
all in al great job and good use of pitch and volume for the speech!
Pace: The rhythm is a tiny bit slow at the part where the husband was speaking. Pitch: You could add more emphasis on 'give me my ring part' to make it sound more scary.
ReplyDeletePauses: Only pause at the full stops and commas
Pronunciation: " TH" can be pronounced clearly like when you said "not a thing"
Tone: More enthusiastic and more energetic
all in al great job and good use of pitch and volume for the speech!
Rhythm was quite slow, a few mispronunciations
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