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Ethan, your volume is on point. And I can feel the poem's buildup, so work on it. Some end consonants could be more emphasised, such as the -ed sound. Nice try!
Pronunciation and Articulation: 3Fluency, Rhythm and Pace: 3Pitch and Tone: 3Pause: 4Power:3
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ReplyDeleteEthan, your volume is on point. And I can feel the poem's buildup, so work on it. Some end consonants could be more emphasised, such as the -ed sound. Nice try!
ReplyDeletePronunciation and Articulation: 3
ReplyDeleteFluency, Rhythm and Pace: 3
Pitch and Tone: 3
Pause: 4
Power:3