Pronunciation- Not many words were mispronounced. Pace- It was read a little too fast. Pitch& tone- It was used often but not always conveying the meaning of the poem/sentence, Pauses- Pauses were appropriate. Power- Voice was not as strong.
Pronunciation: Words like thud can have a stronger " d" sound but the pronunciation of the rest of the word are good Pace: The pace is a little to fast and doesnt match the message that the poem is trying to tell Pitch- The pitch is used well in the part " GOAL" good job:) Power- The voice was powerful and loud
Quite good and the pronunciation was good, maybe pacing could be better?
ReplyDeleteCould better pace yourself
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ReplyDeletePronunciation- Not many words were mispronounced.
ReplyDeletePace- It was read a little too fast.
Pitch& tone- It was used often but not always conveying the meaning of the poem/sentence,
Pauses- Pauses were appropriate.
Power- Voice was not as strong.
Pronunciation: Words like thud can have a stronger " d" sound but the pronunciation of the rest of the word are good
ReplyDeletePace: The pace is a little to fast and doesnt match the message that the poem is trying to tell
Pitch- The pitch is used well in the part " GOAL" good job:)
Power- The voice was powerful and loud