I think you should give the cousin a name. Your points are good, however, they lack linking paragraphs.
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I think that you should have put a real address and also a name for your cousin. Your points are good though.
I think you should give the cousin a name. Your points are good, however, they lack linking paragraphs.
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ReplyDeleteI think that you should have put a real address and also a name for your cousin. Your points are good though.
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