tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6584267638051785114.post8587926356989140948..comments2016-09-13T01:43:26.146-07:00Comments on 2016 S1-03 Language Arts: Email Writing by Oh Jun Rong (21)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6584267638051785114.post-70558945248558235082016-04-30T23:33:33.019-07:002016-04-30T23:33:33.019-07:00The points are well elaborated. Just make sure to ...The points are well elaborated. Just make sure to watch out for the valediction. Instead of Yours Sincerely, which is for formal occasions, you could use other valedictions like "your cousin" etc.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6584267638051785114.post-90602831658767022772016-04-30T22:52:22.471-07:002016-04-30T22:52:22.471-07:00Your points are good, but I feel that the letter s...Your points are good, but I feel that the letter should be more welcoming and should include a less formal valediction such as 'best wishes', 'bye for now', 'your cousin' instead of 'yours sincerely'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com